Welcome to the 23rd issue of the Cold Email Leverage newsletter where we discover 3 tips and 3 cold email templates every Wednesday
🎯 3 Cold Email Tips
Avoid Extremely long sentences
One of the best thing you will ever do to make your email save from getting reported or marked spam.
No one wants to read a long-form sentence until it’s a letter from their crush or loved ones
Being too casual (or formal)
This is where your research insights play their role, you have to research the person and their day-to-day language, how they talk, and what kind of languaging they engage with.
Robotic language
Another human can decode how human sounds and how a robot sounds, learn to write your email in human language, don’t make it sound robotic
📝 3 Cold Email Templates that Worked
Pitching your freelance service with social proof
Subject: [Jacob], can you help with [landing page copy]? Body: Hello {Jacob}, Do you people at {ABC Inc.} deal with {landing page copy problems} right now? I’m from {XYZ company} and I’m working with dozens of companies from your field, like [Examples of companies] to make sure their [landing page copy issue] is resolved on a daily basis because of our [landing page copy services]. Trust me, I know you might not have an easy day as the [Position of prospect] and your schedule might be as busy as it gets, but how about we settle for a quick call for later? We might get to the bottom of this and eradicate the problem forever. Cheers!
Cold Emailing for a job at XYZ Company
Subject Line: Helping you get major benefit Body: Hi Bob, Your [blog, article, job post, social profile is amazing]. One of my favorite things about it is [something you actually love about the company or client.] In fact, your [brand, website, app, or other design project] reminds me of a past client, [impressive past client], that needed something similar and tells me you probably want [amazing benefit client received] received from the project as well. Can I send you some ideas for how we can work on this? Regards, <Your Name>
Pitching prospects something to try
Subject: Save Time. Get Leads. Body: Hi <Prospect First Name>, We know it's not easy finding relevant leads. Staying ahead of your competition, especially in the restaurant industry, is essential. Time has to be spent every single day to make sure you make the right decision and stay on top. Efficient. Reliable. Trustworthy. These are just a few things you become when you don't have to spend hours looking for leads. <Company, Tool, Resources> is here for you. A cold outreach soluton you've been looking for. Let us help you get back into rhythm. Your time and effort deserve to be matched with the prowess of <Company, Tool, Resources>. Try it for free now. Thanks and Regards, <Your name>
That's it for this week! We will be back with more tips and templates next week!
Hope you make the most out of these. All the best 🙌
So, What’s next? 👀
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